Completion requirements
Please read the statements below. Paraphrase/rewrite the statements using qualifiers/hedges to make them more credible.
Example:
Ottomans had close relations with the Byzantium Empire from the start of their existence. This led to the exchange of many cultural elements between the two societies ranging from food to language. In addition, Ottoman music was influenced by Byzantium music.
Paraphrased version:
Ottomans adopted an intimate approach towards the Byzantium Empire since their emergence. This situation contributed into the bartering of cultural components including food and language. Moreover, Byzantium music had an influence on Ottoman music.
Example:
Ottomans had close relations with the Byzantium Empire from the start of their existence. This led to the exchange of many cultural elements between the two societies ranging from food to language. In addition, Ottoman music was influenced by Byzantium music.
Paraphrased version:
Ottomans adopted an intimate approach towards the Byzantium Empire since their emergence. This situation contributed into the bartering of cultural components including food and language. Moreover, Byzantium music had an influence on Ottoman music.